The Most Beautiful Breeze of Dawn

After looking at my old picture of this design I made for her in SCV, I wanted to run away and hold my head in shame. (>O_O)
So I'm redoing it. This is Talim's close-up. Omg, I'd marry her if I was a man :3
I'll upload the whole outfit and body part later on when I'm done coloring. (Tablet is acting up. Oh noes...)
Drawn by hand, then colored by Photoshop and with the use of a Wacom bamboo tablet. Any critiques or suggestion is welcome
*I think I should make adjustments to her chest...